Extra Feedback

After a class discussion we have gained more feedback of how to improve our opening even more, for example the car sequence could be made more exciting by adding some different music to the sequence. To keep the opening serious we are going to change the name of the agents and to show the location of the agents at the beginning rather than the name. With the zooming in sequence there was a comment that it was too slow, we have already shortened this sequence but we can try and speed it up.

Problem noticed

We noticed an error in the spelling of 'Original' in the credits. We will change this as soon as possible.

Our response to the feedback

Several people said they liked the car sequence, which was good. They also said the ident and the editing was good.
However several people thought the credits weren't on screen for long enough. We will try to rectify this situation. Some other people mentioned that the white noise needed to be cropped. However we are going to leave this because it was intentional.
The agents were undercover and therefore the costume was casual, and so the comment about costume was invalid.

Feedback - Things to improve

'Some of the credits were too quick to read'
'Could be improved with sound to add thrill and tension, and also costume could be improved'
'you're white noise needs to be cropped so it's all the same size. We got confused :('
'Thought it was called white noise :|'

Feedback - Good points

'The car bit was good + the way the credits were shown'
'The editing was very good through the film'
'really like the clock time and ident'
'Ident is G'
'music - well creepy'
'white noise - sense of loss of power (Y)'
'camera shots!'
'I like this'
'like the merge at the end'
'ENDING MESSAGE PROPER WORKED'

Next step

Our next stage is to evaluate our work this will need to be done by 20th to make sure its in for the final deadline as Rupert & Hayley are going away.

Rough Cut Opening Sequence!!!